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May 11, 2005

musicality
so he said, when I asked him what he meant about the line in his poem being "too prosey" he having uttered those words injust that sniffy voice poets sometimes muster when prose&poetry co-mingle asif it were not an abomination, that the music almost stopped

all the snobbery aside it is the best it is the most helpful differentiation I've ever been offered and the wisdom he lent me has already sharpened my ear

meanwhile I'm also striving to end-up with, asin fashion, the ambience rather than starting with the already used-up, asitwere, feeling asif it were a still-life